I loved the addition to the beginning, it really helped make that scene and the set up. It was a pleasure to read (and work on, you paint so many wonderful mental images), the sutle drama of it gets me every time. Lol, as I'm re-reading it, I see now what Sam meant about the candy thing.
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Date: 2011-10-14 06:41 pm (UTC)