WotM: The early writings
Oct. 2nd, 2006 12:01 am![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
stellawindCan I just say that my respect for anyone's perseverance to suffer through WotM to past ch. 20 has just gone waaaaaaay up? I was rereading the story, trying to recapture the magic. Originally, I was looking up a name, seeing if she had even made it in, but got wrapped up, and went back to the start, the first chapter.
My eyes burn; seared by the missing words and bad grammar. The early dialogue. Forgotten plot pieces. The OOC actions.
I'm horrified and awed that I don't remember my writing as this bad.
It needs to rewritten. I've know this for a while. I just had no idea how badly it needed it. No clue or conceptions.
Forgive me.
My eyes burn; seared by the missing words and bad grammar. The early dialogue. Forgotten plot pieces. The OOC actions.
I'm horrified and awed that I don't remember my writing as this bad.
It needs to rewritten. I've know this for a while. I just had no idea how badly it needed it. No clue or conceptions.
Forgive me.
