Pst! Help!

[stellawind]

 So, the summer writing bug hit urplesquirrel  and I early this year. We have this lovely little Kingdom Hearts fic all plotted out, a chapter ready to post, but no idea what our best summary would be. Help?

Comments

[fateofshadow.livejournal.com]

I voted for number one as it's not only the most dramatic but it also makes the most sense and flows best. That's what I think at least.

[http://users.livejournal.com/_yaten_kou_/]

Honestly, I think the quotes are good, but the summaries are not as compelling as they could be. Out of the ones you have, I like the first one the best.

[stellawind.livejournal.com]

Thanks. It looks like we might be doing a mix of that one and another, which should give us something board enough.

[stellawind.livejournal.com]

First one seems to be the favorite right now, but you're right about the summaries. We can have trouble figuring out the best way to compact stuff.