Pst! Help!

[stellawind]

 So, the summer writing bug hit urplesquirrel  and I early this year. We have this lovely little Kingdom Hearts fic all plotted out, a chapter ready to post, but no idea what our best summary would be. Help?

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[fateofshadow.livejournal.com]

I voted for number one as it's not only the most dramatic but it also makes the most sense and flows best. That's what I think at least.

[http://users.livejournal.com/_yaten_kou_/]

Honestly, I think the quotes are good, but the summaries are not as compelling as they could be. Out of the ones you have, I like the first one the best.